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At first, I was a little disappointed with the lack of comments on the last part of this story ... except for Denitson.  Everybody knows I love him almost as much as he loves me.  In fact, last night I had quite the dream about Mr. D-to-the-Trip-7's (yeah, I dunno ... I just made that up).

And yes, we were naked.  But in our defense, so were chipmunks.

So, I was disappointed about the lack of comments, but then I realized that hell, even *I* wouldn't have commented on that part of the story.  It was filler, and not very exciting filler either.  This one is better.

At any rate, I'm going to get the wristband mailers together tomorrow, so watch for the follow-up video tonight or tomorrow.  Also, I have a quick video I need to do about some channel recommendations and a small run-in I had with some plain bad youtube-etiquette.  It kinda just got me miffed for a bit and resulted in a swift "unsubscribe" on my part.  I'll talk about it later, though.

Finally: Lupine, that's a brilliant idea for Zombie Flu story (he left a comment on the "Zombie FU" post below--read it!).  If you don't write it, well, I won't either, but it'll definitely percolate.

Next chapter of Peter & the Dark Wolf is after the break!


Peter & the Dark Wolf
Chapter 1
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I'm not sure how a day at the carnival can be considered a date when the girl's best friend tags along, but I had reached a point in my transition to the dark lair where I simply didn't care about such trivial matters.

"Only two to a car," the Ferris wheel operator informed us when our turn to travel the circle came up.

Patience (or Joy) looked at me and she had managed to work her face of generic features into some expression resembling disappointment. I quickly decided that it would be a smart idea to fend off any unnecessary interactions.

"You two go ahead," I said, injecting a sense of empathy into my voice and manufacturing an expression that I hoped didn't look too contrived. I had made the decision to return to my dark lair, this much was true, but I still had three days to go, after all.

Patience (or Joy) smiled at me with what passed among the surface-dwellers as warmth. She gave me a quick kiss before climbing into the car with her best friend. I stood solemnly and watched as the wheel rotated and lifted my girlfriend-of-the-week into the sky.

"Sir?"

The ride operator was holding the next car door open for me. Despite my sudden reprieve from enduring the circular wonder that was the Ferris wheel, I found myself having a change of heart. Without Patience (or Joy), the ride would afford me an opportunity to reflect on my imminent return to the dark lair. So it was with an unexpected satisfaction--which had absolutely nothing to do with the ride itself--that I boarded the car, sitting in the middle of the bench and prepared to lose myself in the dark depths of my mind for the duration of the ride.

A woman cleared her throat and I glanced up to see a dark-haired female dressed in black, sporting  crimson-red lipstick. Clearly, she had every intention of joining me on this ride.  A notion which immediately excited me.

Liked it?  Hated it?  Leave a comment and I'll post more ...

(Need to catch up?  Click here for the rest of the story.)

 


Comments

Tue, 30 Jun 2009 10:24:07 am

Beware of darkly clad sensuous woman >.>

I'm loving this, keep it up!
Oh, also, beware of new fangirls seen as I've been pimping you out to pretty much everyone who's had the gall to tell me they're "bored". Hopefully that'll make for some new insight on this delectable piece of work.

 

krumbine

Tue, 30 Jun 2009 10:28:56 am

A billion gold stars for the Spazatron!!! Any and all publicity is like a gift from god :)

 

Sketchy McSketchatron

Tue, 30 Jun 2009 11:39:53 pm

Does she have a goth mustache? That would be hot. In fact, all mustaches are hot. Sketchy ones even more so? That reminds me, can you grow a mustache? I bet you can grow a sexy sketchy mustache that makes all the hairy goth girls squeal and wheeze with delight.

 

LupineLooPine

Wed, 01 Jul 2009 12:21:19 am

Krumbine, I had this totally nutty comment spewing forth from my fingers for your previous post. Well, long story short, my comp conked out because of a loose connection of the power supply at the back, which is only half as annoying as my monitor which keeps blanking out until I smack it for a bit to get it to light back up. Anyway, I wanted to say how great the one posted before this was descriptively.. even more so than the first part, and how the mention of sex was like sprinkles on the peanut butter sandwich of a post. I now save my comments so that I don't have to type my enormous posts after unforeseeable events annoy me to the point of me wanting to bust my nuts.. so that even if I do have accidental spawn they don't have to endure the agony of living in this god damned prison world with its puppet shows for the purpose of distraction/empty entertainment.
Hmm... maybe this current runs deeper than I thought. Anyway sir, great post and looking forward to the chick in black.

 

Wed, 01 Jul 2009 1:32:46 am

that woman has gotta be a lycanthrope...i can smell her from here



 

Denny7

Fri, 03 Jul 2009 11:10:39 pm

1.3 wasnt bad,i dont think it was a filler,but you know that's just me...Anyways not all of them are going to be killer..there's is gonna be be some filler here and there but that's only to relax between the ass kicking darkness

 



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